Verbal Aftermath

A.M. Morgan
I think I know
Wait a minute as a matter of fact I do
You no longer care for me despite my innermost feelings for you
This is the end
There is no longer a right way for us
So I won't beg you to stay
When you prefer to leave
Honestly my heart understands the outcome
As I hear your footsteps as you walk out the door
As the song goes, "Love don't live here anymore."
I feel guilty because I let you have one last taste of passion
Intimately I invited you inside of me but passively you escaped me
Quite foolishly I reached out to you one last time expecting you to need me too
There are no stars in the sky
It's a full moon
It's rainy in my world
And I cannot find shelter from the heavy downpour of my inner city blues

Published by A.M. Morgan

A.M. Morgan is a New Orleans native who enjoys creative writing and the performing arts.  View profile

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  • mwtsaginaw2/20/2008

    Dang, on this "Early Afternoon with A.M." on the very first one I put something about Langston Hughes, and on the next one, you have something about Langston Hughes! Then I read about a half-dozen more, and put some comment on your other poem about Inner City Blues. And now I see inner city blues! Creepy. ....... But honest, in the pfootsteps image, it seems like I would have been tough to turn on that sort of angle with those sorts of footprints. And that looks like sand; come on up to the Great Lakes and walk through all the snow! (Just had to be picky one time.) -- Mike

  • 3lilangels2/6/2008

    great job very sab but beautifully written

  • Gyani2/5/2008

    I didn't understand the significance of the reference to the stars and full moon.

  • Harry Gunawan1/30/2008

    I got the blues for this poem. Thank you for sharing with us Morgan.

  • Elena H.1/29/2008

    Very sad-but well written.

  • K. Jai Estes1/29/2008

    Tremendous work of poetry!

  • Kim Linton1/29/2008

    Very touching (and sad). A writer's job is to make others feel something and you accomplished that with this piece. Great job!

  • QUICHE1/28/2008

    I have been there before, this really touched me. I felt the pain behind this poem.

  • Molly Carter1/28/2008

    Aw, so sad.

  • Nascent Sam1/27/2008

    I've felt precisely like this several times before. Great description of those failed attempts we make in the end. Nice job.

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