Vultures Circling Vultures

An Original Poem

Rena Sherwood

Flightless hopes that couldn't matter

twined around the bones and clattered

of the silent swooping stares

of those who perched and couldn't dare

Their flock mates with naked heads

feasted on the just dropped dead

and all of their feast's hopes and prayers

of vultures who perched and couldn't dare

The beginning of hatching in the sun

shaming their benevolent mothers, every one

of the silent swooping stares

of dreaming vultures that just won't dare

Their flock mates grew fat and loud

fearless, terrible but not proud

The others just perched and compared

the past to their hopes down there

Swiveled and shriveled

the last perching vulture scribbled

a curse to potential prayers

for those who think life and death are fair

Published by Rena Sherwood - Featured Contributor in Lifestyle

Rena Sherwood is a freelance writer and Peter Gabriel fan who has lived both in America and England. She has studied animals most of her life through a synthesis of direct observation and insatiable reading....  View profile

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  • Sandy James7/26/2011

    Wow!

  • Vonda J. Sines7/16/2011

    There is a dark but admirable tone to this.

  • TRESA PATTERSON7/5/2011

    powerful

  • Laura Cone7/4/2011

    nice

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW7/4/2011

    Well done... and put together to work around the text editor chronic glitch!

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