Wandering Questions

RipDiction
Does a memory slip, does a passion slide?

Does a feeling chip, do two hearts collide?

Do the flowers bloom only for thee?

Do the birds sing to give you glee?

Do the fires burn to make your light?

Do the wind's howls to cause you fright?

If the wind bore an angel,

would you look on in awe?

Would you run to the road,

screaming what you saw?

If the mountains began to crumble,

Crumble, beneath your feet...

...would you shout at the ground?

As it tumbles to defeat.

If you gazed at your soul, deep in your being,

Would you smile or cry about what you are seeing?

Gaze in a looking glass what do you see?

Wondering questions of what could be?

Published by RipDiction

Degree in the University of Life, Social Sciences, Human Service, Creative writing thinking outside the box. Moderate interest in online gaming in free time.  View profile

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  • Tal Boldo10/30/2009

    Oh, wow! This is the best of your poems that I've read. And yes, the picture of Dorian Gray question is always with me. It is the most important feeling in the world--how you feel about the lines--echoes of experience--furrowing your features.

  • Ana Maria Alvarez6/1/2009

    Wow, I can't believe I missed this, awesome rhythm, great imagery, and a beautiful flow!

  • RipDiction4/8/2009

    Thank you Tiadora, glad you enjoyed it.

  • Tiadora Anderson4/6/2009

    beautiful poem.

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