Water Currents

Coffee Mugg

I watch the clouds slowly drifting,
The stars far behind,
I feel myself wishing,
As the wind rustles the pine.

A true love awaits,
But where to be found,
Heartache castrates,
A love so profound.

Dubious remorse dwells,
In a broken heart of thunder,
Lightening augments,
Morbid thoughts of wonder.

Where is the love,
Profoundly empty heart,
Languor in solitude,
As limpid water currents part.

Published by Coffee Mugg

I am a 60 year old male, born and raised in Alabama. Have been in construction most of adult life, and had lived in Orlando Fl for over 30 years. Have now come back to Alabama. Could be considered an expert...  View profile

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  • K. Ray3/28/2008

    How beautiful!

  • Nancie Norton3/28/2008

    You can dar n sure write a good poem!!!!!!!! i had to separate the n, because together, it looked like a different word!! GOOD JOB KEN !
    ~~ PEACE ~~

  • Chelle3/28/2008

    great poem (again, i should add)

  • Pearlygates3/28/2008

    This is just beautiful!

  • Lisa Renee.3/28/2008

    Very beautiful!

  • 3lilangels3/28/2008

    Very beautiful, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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