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  • Walton S. Tissot9/13/2009

    Graves is indeed a good way to say it. Great poem great insight.

  • Tina Twito9/10/2009

    We are in a very tiny town and it was bizarre to see all these "graves" in nearly everyone's yard.

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky9/10/2009

    Nicely done.

  • Shaheen Darr9/10/2009

    you put the message across very well!

  • Sharon Pfohl9/10/2009

    You said a lot in a few words.

  • Bridgitte Williams9/9/2009

    Great writing, my friend! These water tanks are darn scary...brrr...

  • J L Carey Jr9/9/2009

    This is fantastic.

  • Richard Ryder9/9/2009

    wow. good job.

  • Deonils9/9/2009

    short, concise damming --not damning, or daMNATION! good work; Shalom

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