Waterlily Rose Maiden

Marilisa Kinney Sachteleben
her eyes, green-gray still waters, do not cry
not mirror nor window of soul dark spaces,
guardians hold prisoner, secrets shy
in soft tranquil deep and twilight traces

her skin, like dogwood blossoms translucent
rose petal fair and water-lily pale
heaven-bound as nimbus, storm-cloud spent
fresh as a lamb, nested quiet in vale

no tears descend this tender, pallid cheek
no sorrow escapes this unworldly maid
no companion shares nor solace does seek
perfect in slumber, unmoving and staid

Silent in her grave, somber and death-cold
Never feel pain, nor mother's in arms enfold.

Published by Marilisa Kinney Sachteleben

Happy wife. Mom of 4. 10+ year homeschool vet. Certified K-8/special ed. Yahoo! News Beat Writer: Parenting, Michigan, Detroit. Published on Helium, SEED, AT&T, Diabetes Active, Mapquest, Best Contractors, H...  View profile

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  • kimberly brueland6/22/2011

    nice poem

  • Kyra Lennon5/4/2011

    Absolutely beautiful.

  • Carol Rucker4/23/2011

    Beautiful.

  • Cathy A Montville4/22/2011

    I have been waiting to see this! I knew you would write a moving and heartfelt sonnet! Such a beautiful piece, Mar! I cannot come up with an adequate comment to compliment your fine work! You will just have to take my word! :)

  • Tonya Hillukka4/22/2011

    Beautiful sonnet! Good luck...

  • Mike Spain4/22/2011

    very nice!

  • Doug Clore4/22/2011

    I think you may have the soul of a poet. Very nice.

  • Davida Chazan4/22/2011

    Damn... hang the iambic pentameter - this is beautiful!

  • Juniper Russo4/21/2011

    This is absolutely stunning, Marilisa. Good luck!

  • TRESA PATTERSON4/21/2011

    much tenderness...

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