Wednesday Haiku (Do Not Read Tonight ... And Please Do)

A Hike for U (Haiku) for the Road Less Traveled

Deonils
leaf floats down clear stream

some soiled at the bend ... dying

they feed life - mirror!

Published by Deonils

I became a teacher in South Africa; since then I have worked in government, schools and higher education. My small business utilises my teacher-training & adult literacy interests/skills.  View profile

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  • Angel Vee7/17/2009

    Aww very nice!

  • Roberta Baxter7/15/2009

    Yes, I followed your instruction even it it was a little vague. Your Haiku relates much. TX

  • Kristie Leong M.D.7/15/2009

    I really enjoy your haiku. :-)

  • Tina Twito7/15/2009

    Says so much!

  • Deonils7/15/2009

    you disciplined readers you! Of course, I was trying a little tease, but you certainly stayed away until the right time, always! Shalom

  • John Smither7/15/2009

    I waited until Wednesday, only cause I wasn't online until then.

  • Greenhill7/15/2009

    Ok Neil, I waited for today to read! Good peom...

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