What Would Life Be like If I Were Just like You?

Catdog
The preaching I grew up with
The lectures you do give
Are basically the same to me; I do reclaim
All aspects of my day as they may seem
Continually every thing I do, the result is the same
Nothing is good enough for you, no praise I redeem
Every word between us we have spoken lately
There you wait with anticipation; debate me
You always have the wisdom you're eager to say
That I handled it wrong, should've done this way
Next time "you do this" or "you do that"
Crazy I become with feeling a dingbat
Not everyone is just like you
Nor will they live as you do
You can't control this lioness cat
My ways are to remain. You adapt
As much as I know in your heart is my interest
Just sit back, relax, and listen, with you I share myself
Our relationship should be savored; entrust
Not trying to change who I am, Doctor of my health
Sometimes I just want my voice to be heard
Not informed of what's in my best regard
You might not realize what it's like when you try
Always to construct me in your likeness
The perfect woman you try to create; wonder why?
Nothing then would be to share, complete quietness
A relationship with nothing to accomplish or learn
A relationship pointlessly, no passion to burn

Isn't that reason enough why you should accept me
Let your guard down, let me learn, and let me be
Just to keep the flame lit, passion alive
Opposites attract, thus we thrive

Published by Catdog

College Student and Mother; who laughs at life, and does better every day than the day before! Purring, meowing, and howling proud parent of Catdoggie Oggie Productions!  View profile

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  • Linda Ann Nickerson4/19/2008

    "You can't control this lioness cat." LOVE THAT LINE. ;-)

  • cathiesbloggs4/18/2008

    This poem is beautiful and so are you !!!

  • Chelle4/16/2008

    love that line "you adapt'!!

  • Lisa Renee.4/16/2008

    Beautiful...You definitely have a gift!

  • 3lilangels4/15/2008

    Simply beautiful, your so talented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI4/14/2008

    Denser thoughts which lead to dignified way of life;Sublime ideas in superb form!

  • Coffee Mugg4/13/2008

    one without the other ....... sorry

  • Coffee Mugg4/13/2008

    If there were no opposites there would be no moon, then what would we do on nights that were suppose to be moonlit. Everything is related, it needs to be to survive, there cannot be one with the other. Good Job Miss "CD" ken

  • RM Gal4/13/2008

    You are the perfect woman! Let it be recognized! Great poem!

  • CJ Mathis4/13/2008

    Really well written poem

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