When I Flow By

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The anti mack

Gets more action than sweat boxing

The ladies like what they can't get

When it comes to attention

When I ignore them

Is when they swarm

When it comes to showing interest

I often hold back

Is when they swarm

Saying to me "I like."

I often hold back

Observing, enjoying, and plotting

Saying to me "I like."

When I flow by

Observing, enjoying and plotting

I repeat over and again

When I flow by

They take a long look

I repeat over and again

All the girls want some

They take a long look

When I wear all black

All the girls want some

Caught up in the full me

When I dress all black

The ladies like what they can't get

The best rhythm to give them

The anti mack

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  • Dr. Jamie Y. Marable5/4/2008

    You've painted quite a character in this poem. The title alone creates a great visual. I can really see this playing out and I'm sure that a lot of guys (and women too) can relate to the message. Well done.

  • A.M. Morgan5/4/2008

    Actually this is true. When you ignore someone especially if they are use to getting attention they try to make you notice them.

  • Nancie Norton5/3/2008

    Well now......Not all women like to be ignored...lol..Some of them like to do the ignoring!!!????? Excellent style, Good job, Thank you for sharing+*+*+* ~ PEACE ~

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