When the Muse Hits

And when it Doesn't

Tussy
When the muse hits,

the pen writes mightily,

no furrowed brows,

no sweaty paws.

When the muse hits,

the pen writes steadily,

the words flow freely,

thoughts formed so easy.

When the muse hits,

the pen glides,

on paper it strides,

idea or thought abides.

When the muse hits,

the pen is a weapon,

of great destruction,

which can wreck devastation.

When the muse departs,

the pen is silent,

seemingly indolent,

a useless implement.

Published by Tussy

I first saw the light of day on the 19th day of November in the Pearl of the Orient Seas. Born and bred a Roman Catholic and received Catholic education from the primary on to the secondary until I finished...  View profile

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  • Rebecca Foster12/10/2009

    Good one! Sometimes I'd like to hit my muse!

  • Patrick Bernauw1/3/2009

    The Muse surely hitted you... how wonderful your words flow!

  • Cathy A Montville12/27/2008

    A weapon indeed! When you think about it, it is really quite profound!

  • Donald Pennington12/23/2008

    Yes it can be rough that writer's block. But your muse is a powerful friend. You should talk.

  • 3lilangels12/23/2008

    So enjoyable!

  • ElephantHeart Nine12/23/2008

    I think you summed it up nicely. Sometimes, it is so very easy. Other times, one can sit and stare at the paper/computer screen, watching as nothing happens. Good work, Tussy.

  • Kristie Leong M.D.12/22/2008

    This is excellent work. Beautifully done. :-)

  • Roberta Baxter12/22/2008

    Well penned with wonderful imagery to boot! Roberta Baxter

  • Tony Vega12/22/2008

    the pen is a weapon..love it! Great close.

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