When it Rained
The Last Goodbye
You were there
Eyes boring into my soul
Taking a drag on your cigarette
Staring out the window
The muscles in your bare back
Flexing
Telling me you loved me
But...
You were there
Turning around
Looking for your shirt
Grabbing your keys
Kissing me goodbye
One last time
You were there
When it rained.
Published by Becky Smith
I served as the Senior Editor of a local parenting publication for 2 years and am now the Layout Editor for OKIE magazine, a local arts, news and entertainment publication.Writing was always my dream job. I... View profile
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12 Comments
Post a CommentReally great poem. Very sad though.
This is very good
Beautifully told, and so sad, and I can relate, it is obvious that it is true. Beautiful poetry.
nice poem!
Very heart felt.
Very moving writing.
Sad poem :(
fantastic piece. beautifully written.
Really great.
really nice....