When I Wasn't Looking

C. Love
Right before my eyes
You inhaled your first breath
Uttered your first words
And took your first steps

Right before my eyes
You grew over five feet tall
Learned to read and write
To walk and not fall

When I wasn't looking
You cultivated a personality
Figured out likes and dislikes
Gained your sense of originality

When I wasn't looking
You developed character and integrity
Learned to stand on your own
And how to over come adversity

When I wasn't looking
You constructed an exquisite heart
Became the beautiful, young woman
God intended from the start

Published by C. Love

"If I have the gift of prophecy, and understand all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith, so that I could remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing."  View profile

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  • Evette9/11/2010

    Beautiful poem. I love every word, it touched my heart. I have a son that I'm feeling that way about now.

  • george chavez10/18/2009

    This is so cool, very nice.

  • Kid-Romeo9/1/2009

    great poem you have a nice talent, i am a poet too on myspace i call myself the notrious rap poet, lol i have almost 100 poems written you can check them out on here also, please do when you can thanx, :) i always love meeting other poets

  • Nneka7/16/2009

    Beautiful!!!!! :))

  • Cherie Bowser6/20/2009

    Very nice poem!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA6/11/2009

    very nice as always.

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW6/10/2009

    Lovely! Wonderful thoughts and inspiring words.

  • Pattie Byrd6/9/2009

    What beautiful thoughts.

  • Dr. Jamie Y. Marable5/30/2009

    Precious!

  • Arkay Evans5/23/2009

    There is such pride weaved into this lovely piece - So very well done!

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