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  • Kassidy Emmerson6/3/2008

    This reminds me that when a loved one really does die, it seems so much like a bad dream.

  • Mags5/31/2008

    This was amazingly written!!

  • cathiesbloggs5/27/2008

    oh Man !!...this is so beautiful !!

  • Louisa3645/26/2008

    This takes my breath away!!! creative format, amazing message!!! :)

  • April Lorier5/26/2008

    What a unique way to write a poem! You did good, girl, and I'm glad you woke up and found your hubby alive!

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper5/26/2008

    Interesting form, great :) Sheri

  • Baconator5/26/2008

    Damn girl, you need to get more sleep and spend more time with your hubby! Sounds like your mind is working in overdrive. Often our dreams tell us things.. just my opinion, but maybe it is saying a little more one on one time? lol! Love yah!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA5/26/2008

    this is alo my question ! Why dead my lord ? why ? very heart-felt poem. Well done.

  • 3lilangels5/26/2008

    WOW this was a very strong poem fantastic piece here,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • RM Gal5/25/2008

    Beautiful poem. Very sad; very powerful. Uniquely put.

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