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  • K. Jai Estes1/29/2008

    Beautiful, beautiful haiku! And you know I love haiku!!! :)

  • Mary Naylor1/29/2008

    I like your Haiku, especially the images of winter.

  • Harry Gunawan1/28/2008

    Beautifully chilling Lisa. You crafted this haiku wonderfully. I love it! :-)

  • Charles Reynolds1/27/2008

    Oh yes! Wonderful job Lisa. This, I must say, is my favorite to date. I concur with the third line comments. Perfectly ended. Bravo!

  • Karen1/27/2008

    Well done, Lisa! And you've got that mysterious third Haiku line: what or who exactly reflects the fallen snow? Is it the Sun, or the cold winter morning? Or is it our lives that reflect the blanket of fallen snow in the quietude of the dawn of the winter morning? Good job on the tricky bit of a Haiku: bringing a revelation!

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