With You

My Life is Complete

Joey Liam
With you, I find myself falling in love again
Feeling like I am back in high school
It's just like writing my first song
Which, by the way, was amazingly beautiful

With you, my heart always feels good
You fill it up with love and inspiration
I can't complain, what can I say?
I am simply filled with admiration

With you, my soul feels so warm and free
Like a balladeer's sonata in the night
It lingers and takes its simple course
Right directly to your heart

With you, yes, with you
I feel so young and so alive
So long as you're here, I'll never be lonely again
And my life, with you, will forever thrive

Published by Joey Liam

Joey Liam is a freelance writer who specializes in religion, sports, creative writing, parenting, and technology. He serves in the military and currently designated as the Overall Coordinator for the San Die...  View profile

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  • Joey Liam1/30/2010

    We can only try, David. Thanks!

  • David A. Reinstein, LCSW1/30/2010

    Words fail love... but they are the best attempt we can make! Well done.

  • Jack Wellman1/27/2010

    I agree with the ladies below. You really know how to weave a beautiful web of love into words. Well done Joey. You've got a gift for this. : - )

  • Joey Liam1/27/2010

    Thanks, Cindy, Patty and RC. I appreciate all your kind comments.

  • R.C. Johnson1/27/2010

    It doesn't get any better than that in the love department, Joey. You are indeed blessed, as is the love of your life!

  • Pattie Byrd1/26/2010

    Nice, Joey. Love shines through.

  • Cindy Tuttle1/26/2010

    Wonderful love poem! Any woman would LOVE to get that.
    With Love, Cindy

  • Joey Liam1/26/2010

    Thanks, Jacqueline!

  • Susan Jane1/26/2010

    A lovely love poem. Well done!

  • Donna Cavanagh1/26/2010

    very, very pretty and sentimental. Nice job!

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