Would You Still Love Me?

Lisa R. Strong
Would you still love me?
If I were a weed and not a rose;
A clam without a pearl;
If I were a dancer with no grace;
Would you still love me?
If I had nothing at all to say;
A knife without an edge;
A diamond with no facets;
Would you still love me?
If no music could I make;
Or if my footsteps fall hard;
If my nose is a bit too large;
You envision me a beauty;
You love me sight unseen;
But would you still feel the same?
If you should meet me face to face;
A large heart encased in plainness;
Would you love me still?
Or would you be sadly disappointed?

Published by Lisa R. Strong

I was born and raised in Binghamton NY. I have been writing short stories since I was eight years old, and poetry since I was a teenager. I also write prayers, meditations, and opinion articles. My dre...  View profile

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  • A.M. Morgan2/6/2008

    This is beautiful Lisa. I think we all wonder if people would still love us bare and in imperfect form. Your poems continue to move and inspire us.

  • K. Jai Estes2/5/2008

    Lovely poem!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA2/5/2008

    Very nice poem, my sister. It is sooooooo good to read such a wonderful poem. Great poet you are.

  • Harry Gunawan2/4/2008

    Beautifully said Lisa! I still love the poet who made this lovely poem. :-)

  • Charles Reynolds2/3/2008

    Ah, the age old question that defines our insecurities in life. A question we all ask in one form or another throughout our lives. Well done.

  • J. E. Davidson2/3/2008

    Lovely thought.

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI2/3/2008

    Beauty never remains on skin.It is the mind and thought which have to be appreciated.You are a great soul with noble thoughts.
    I adore you,admire you and I will always remain as a sincere friend of you!

  • Justice Lives Not2/2/2008

    I have never seen a picture of you, but as far as I am concerned, you are turly beautiful! Writings like this one simply proves my point!

  • alfonso coley2/2/2008

    eloquent prose. I do not understand what is going on recently with these outsiders coming in and using all types of profanity and obscenities on this site, it should never be tolerated. There are a many of issues that Associated Content editors need to take into consideration.

  • Karen aka 2/2/2008

    Well written and beautiful

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