Wounded by Words - a Rhyming Course for a Writer's Remorse

Might Our Words Wound Far Deeper Than Weapons? Might Such Wounds Be Inflicted Even Without Intention?

Linda Ann Nickerson
Beneath the rule of men entirely great
The pen is mightier than the sword.

- From Richelieu, by Edward Bulwer-Lytton (1803-1873)

Here I stand, with wounded heart,
Damaged by an archer's dart.
The pen, a weapon of much might,
Has turned my day to darkest night.

In fear, I turn and run for life,
Thus panicked by a writer's strife.
Is "cute" a compliment, though terse,
A single word to sum up verse?

For creativity is blood,
And mine is spilt into the mud.
I fear I just may need a crutch,
Thus injured by this rhyme of "much."

Although his phrasings I admire,
My wording might have reached up higher.
For eloquence might earn a smile,
And further fellowship awhile.

The olive branch, I now extend,
To reach a newfound writing friend.
We share a gift, the love of ink,
Regardless of what others think.

And though I deem his wordings "cute,"
My affirmation's absolute.
So may he exit from his cave
To slay more dragons, ever-brave!

Author's Note:

Edward Bulwer-Lytton, a 19th Century English writer and politician, wrote these words: "The pen is mightier than the sword." This much is true, although children may claim the opposite. "Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me." How false this is, for our words may certainly wound far deeper than weapons!

Published by Linda Ann Nickerson - Featured Contributor in Lifestyle and Sports

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  • Mary Naylor2/13/2010

    Well said and how true - also, nice poem!

  • solomen vandy1/30/2009

    freaking awesome i love poetry

  • Kady and Tony Burney1/8/2008

    AMAZING!

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky1/4/2008

    Super piece. Loved it.

  • Elena H.1/2/2008

    Very thoughtful.

  • Lori Piper1/2/2008

    I LOVED THIS

  • Veronica Davidson1/1/2008

    Our mutual friend was much touched.

  • Veronica Davidson1/1/2008

    Love your writing!!

  • Chris M. Carmichael1/1/2008

    absolutely fantastic, Linda. Keep up the great work

  • Lisa Renee.1/1/2008

    This is great...words truly can hurt, but words can also heal. Wonderful poem!

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