Writers: Talent is Only the First Step! Increase Your Readability Factor

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D Armenta
Hi im writng this way to prove a pont this kindf writings very hardto read if shakspere himslef wrote like this he wouldnt B famous ROTLF!! im just ofering a sudjestion if u dont like it then GTFOOH.') LOLbye!!!

The phenomenally talented and brilliant writer F. Scott Fitzgerald received so many rejection slips for his first novel (This Side of Paradise) that he literally wallpapered his room with them. If not for one extremely patient and visionary editor, Maxwell Perkins, F. Scott's beautifully written prose might not be available to us today. Why? Because F. Scott Fitzgerald couldn't spell very well. His manuscripts were hard to read because of this purely technical problem. Most editors had way too much new material to read through without giving themselves a headache trying to figure out what the man was trying to say. We can take a lesson from this.

One thing that many writers forget to do is put themselves in the place of their readers. I read a LOT. I'm talking 3 or 4 books at a time, sometimes as many as 8 books a week. I love to read, and I love to read the material here on AC because there are some extremely talented writers contributing to this site. BUT...some articles, no matter how well expressed, I just give up on and skip after a few lines. The first sentence in this article is an example of why. Free form writing with little or no punctuation, rampant misspellings, run-on sentences, and unfamiliar acronyms meant to take the place of catchphrases or entire sentences gives me a headache. Reading is one of the great joys of my life, but it's hard to concentrate on what is being said by the writer when the flow is continually interrupted by these distractions.

Writers today have a huge advantage over F. Scott Fitzgerald: Spell check, Text editor, a thesaurus at the touch of a key, search engines, printers, and many programs that point out spelling or grammar issues. Revising a text nowadays requires very little effort on the part of the writer. Besides, I know you can hit that Cap key; all those emoticons give it away. :) ;) :O. Use it to begin new sentences , too.

One trick that Fitzgerald used to improve his writing was constantly rereading and revising what he had written. If a sentence ran on too long, he'd catch it on the re-read and break it up. Fitzgerald, despite his spelling issues, had an unerring instinct for sentence structure and flow. Reading over what you've just written, or asking a friend to read it out loud to you, can work wonders in revising text so that it reads easily and well.

Don't get me wrong; everyone lets a typo slip once in awhile. I'm not your high school English teacher, I'm just an experienced reader giving my opinion of what reads well ( to me) and what causes eyestrain and frustration. Think of it this way: if someone approached you and started talking like this on and on without stopping to catch a breath or let you get a word in edgewise and switching from subject to subject with no pause or segue between ideas and kept saying stuff like you know, J.I.C. I wanted some FCs I ran over to Mickey D.s and got a QP..." How long ago did you start to tune out? Reading stuff like that makes people tune out even sooner. The eye tends to skim down to the next paragraph, then the next, then...click. On to a more readable article.

Bottom line is: don't let your unique ideas and thoughts become obscured behind a wall of mistakes. As a reader, I assure you that I will only struggle on through no (or all) capital letters, blatant misspellings, acronyms ad nauseam, no punctuation and run-on sentences for a few seconds at most..and I have a long attention span.

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Educated (somewhat) at University of Maryland, as well as several other schools you've never heard of. Former air traffic controller. Gulf war veteran, 7th fleet. Full-time musician in rockabilly band in Ke...  View profile

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  • A.M. Morgan5/10/2008

    Great job. Mastering the art of revision is essential. Thanks for sharing.

  • Firoze Hirjikaka1/12/2008

    You are so right...having a great idea is not much help unless you can express it elegantly. I spend a lot of time with things like puctuations and using just the right turn of phrase. After a while, it stops being hard work and is actually fun.

  • Herstory3/14/2007

    And "write what you know!" :)

  • Ashley Sinatra3/11/2007

    Very good article. I am a suspect of this a lot of times too. Then I go to read someone else's writing, and it bugs the crap out of me. I guess I am a writing hypocrite, haha. You write very well and clear, as well as informative.

  • Mike Hazelwood2/13/2007

    Great article!! I know i'm always trying to improve on my writing. I let alot of SPAG seep through, but I am going to try and correct this. First impressions are everything! Great article!

  • Artevia Wilborn2/4/2007

    This is a great article...you paint an enthralling picture that is just as enthralling to read

  • Daniel Doyle1/29/2007

    I am writing a book right now...and this was the first thing I have read that felt as if it were deeply helpful...it is even drawing comments that are helpful...Spelling with the existence now of MS Word seems a bit of an unecessary problem for one to have, doesn't it? Thank You

  • LeiLani Dawn1/25/2007

    Hallelujah on all points! A professional writer absolutely has to be aware of spelling and grammar. An aspiring professional writer should be even more aware. The public is not forgiving if your prose (or poetry) turns them off once. They won't come back and give you a second chance.

  • Venus Rachal1/25/2007

    You are right. It can be very aggravating to see a string of typos in an article. I cringe when I catch a typo in an AC article that already got published. If I could easily go back in and fix the typos, I would because it annoys me even if a reader doesn't catch it. I'm also one of those people who hates getting emails where people don't use capital letters, commas, or periods!

  • Firoze Hirjikaka1/17/2007

    You're a lady after my own heart. You have unerringly touched upon my three bugbears;poor spelling, almost non-existant punctuation and indiscriminate use of acronyms/abbreviations. The last is particularly galling. It indicates that the writer arrogantly assumes we are familiar with his world; or he just does not care enough about his readers to spell it out.

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