Yes I Promise

Yes

Kady Birdwhistle
Yes, I promise to mad at you because you will not write, Tony
You have the talent, but you won't use it

I wish I could write half as good as you do
So I promise to be a jerk until you publish something ( LOL)

Yes, I promise to always look at the perfect tummy you have
When you jump to catch the baseball I throw

Yes, I promise to ride bike with you downtown and to donate more
But you need to start donating too

Yes, I promise to always leave the room when forensic files in one
You can catch me hanging out in the bathroom

I swear to stop being so paranoid against the woman who hurt you
Except I will always be angry at her for it

Yes, I swear to always laugh at the Chinese Fortune Cat that you bought me
The way it swiveles is indeed a hoot

Yes, I promise to always be mad at you when you hide the rocks in my Zen, sand garden
I always find those rocks in the vacuum ( shame on you, Tony..... LOLOLOLOL)

Yes, I promise to keep the notes you write to me in the early mornings
I've started taping them to my bedroom wall

Yes, I promise times four and a hundred more that King David is cool and that Jesus and God loves YOU
This I promise you time four

And of course
I want to love you more......... ( remember God loves you)

Published by Kady Birdwhistle

I am a woman seeking to learn more about different writing communities while pursuing my college education. I am currently obsessed with freelance writing, Charlaine Harris (author), yoga,Christianity, Hindu...  View profile

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  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI3/12/2008

    Your mind is as pure as a crystal,your heart is as sacred as that of an apostle,your love to tony is as classical as high as that of a mountain,your poetry is as superb as that of Shakespear and you are as innocent as my grand-daughter!

  • Justice Lives Not3/11/2008

    I apologize for getting so behind on my AC reading. It is work like this that makes you the awesome writer you are, and that is the straight-up truth! You not only give us all the privilege of watching the Kady and Tony story unfold, the innocense of your relationship has your readers hoping for a happy ending. This is amazing work, and I am as proud to be among your favorites as I am to have you among mine.

  • Charlie K3/11/2008

    Another gem, Kady girl.

  • Nikki3/11/2008

    how sweet :-)

  • 3lilangels3/11/2008

    this is so precious and such a wonderful job!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Sonya Covert3/11/2008

    very unique and cute

  • Nancie Norton3/10/2008

    Standing On The promises Of God...... an old Baptist hymn . you and Tony have such a unique relationship. This is sweet!

  • Coffee Mugg3/10/2008

    Good Job Miss Kady

  • Katy Berezny3/10/2008

    How precious is this :)

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