You but Me

Demetria Dixon
** In honor of National Poetry Month, I'm trying my hand at a little iambic pentameter. I've not ever consciously sat down and thought about meter when writing poetry so this month has definitely ben a learning experience.**

I know my heart will bleed when you cut me
With your ill chosen and sharp words like knives
You slew my soul as sure as lye
Does burn into tender flesh to the bone
My heart does bleed with abandon to none

Published by Demetria Dixon

I am a stand up comedian and a writer. I have committed myself to this path and opened myself to the future. I plan to eat, sleep, breath and be it.  View profile

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  • Naomi Kent4/28/2009

    Beautiful...

  • saul relative4/26/2009

    Nicely done...

  • Demetria Dixon4/26/2009

    Today has been a slow e day. Everywhere I type I'm dropping an e. Don't know what's up.

  • Demetria Dixon4/26/2009

    Thank you both. It is tricky but I like it. Not since we read Shakespear in College had I even thought about it.

  • Linda Ann Nickerson4/26/2009

    Iambic pentameter is tricky - nice work.

  • Demetria Dixon4/26/2009

    A lot of stuff happened between publication that I couldn't fix because it published right away.

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