You Are Gone

mimpi
It seems time has been numbed
The wind has missed whispering
The sky is yellow, burning golden bright
Burning my within to dead ashes
Vulnerable, still, I am a cadaver
Being without you is a sin
Now, the heat has stopped
It's just started to rain inside
You are gone
You are gone
Yes, you are gone...

Published by mimpi

Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest.  View profile

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  • Mary E. Coe7/23/2009

    Touching and beautiful.

  • Sherri Thornhill7/1/2009

    Beautiful poem..

  • mayka6/15/2009

    Very touching poem

  • C. McKittrick6/4/2009

    If one has truly gone, then let us be thankful of them as workmen in the "building" of our lives and not fall to longly in remorse.
    You have a beautiful heart little Lady. I would not wish it a moment of lack.

  • Ana Maria Alvarez5/26/2009

    Beautifully written, lovely lines and expression.

  • Jennifer Waite5/23/2009

    Thanks for sharing this!

  • John Smither5/20/2009

    Deep and heart touching poem.

  • jayanti raman5/15/2009

    Very heart touching and very deep meaning poem thanks mimpi

  • Donald Pennington5/14/2009

    touching.

  • 3lilangels5/13/2009

    So deep yet very nicely done!

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